Hrrrrurur! This one is sooo gorgeous! So many things grab my eyes here- For instance, his amazing flowing hair. Really nice job there! I also really like his forehead and eye area, it's so perfectly drawn I could kiss it. ;w; I really love all your Benedict drawings, they are so beautiful!
I must say, this is really amazing. The shading effects and the expression you gave him really compliment Sherlock's character. You gave the drawing a sort of angle and light that make you feel as if the character in the drawing is actually right in front of you.
It's a fine drawing.But as the gentleman pointed out,it's the eyes that're off.At close-up,they look like like cat eyes.The pupils need to be fuller.Just look at your other drawings and you'll see what I mean.
The eyes look fine! The pupils seem small because of the light that's focussed in them - the white dots cover most of the pupil. Plus, the narrow pupil gives an impression of piercing focus, which is very fitting for Sherlock! In a physiological sense, they may be off, but in terms of character likeness and understanding, she's hit it dead on!